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Born on Mars,
A fresh friend 2 many stars,
Burning flames in fields of rebirth,
Bare feet on frozen earth,
Serenity shocks us all
by making friend with anguish,
Parallel lines toss a ball
to startle a permeable wish,
After all,
Tomorrow is another day,
Stormy action is a wrong call,
Woo Moon Maiden
from whom embrace and grace
are the repeating themes
that are often unspoken.
42 comments:
Both the picture and the words have a dream like quality. Curiously relaxing and arousing at the same time.
serenity shocks us all...love this line.dulled as we are with the daily dose of ugly and mundane, serenity can be a revitalising shock.
I like the idea of rebirth and waking up to another day ~
Nice one ~
Lovely write. It takes you away....
"Burning flames in fields of rebirth" - lovely line, lovely poem.
This is for Imaginary Garden... I thought we were to use the photo prompts...?
This is lovely through and through!
nice imagery, metaphors, the works. I liked this piece as it left me in wonderment.
happy gooseberry day!
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The gossamer feel of both the image and the words gives the piece a sense of wonder. Thanks for this beauty.
Namaste..........cj
One could meditate to this.
Very cool!
it's lovely and dreamy ... reminds me of a wrinkle in time...
You had me with the title.
This is so ethereal. Really lovely!
Thanks for dropping by...glad to have discovered you!
Stormy action is a wrong call...great line. Excellent.
Embrace and Grace. That should be a T-shirt, or a restaurant. Perfect!
Hello.
I like the dreaminess of this.
Nice image.
Thanks for sharing.
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Rain, this is good reading but very perplexing to me. Just plain (I need a word, similar to slippery or far out). About when I think I am in sync with your poem things shift.
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BTW, did you hear that a pretty large meteorite coming from Mars landed on earth last July. Pieces of the meteor have been found just now in January in Morocco and are now the world's most expensive stones! :)
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Thanks for comming by
a vivid image of rebirthing...
The pic and your words had so much of synchronized symphony. :)
i like the woo moo maiden
iron mased fighter
i like the woo moo maiden
iron mased fighter
A really soothing read; gentle yet deep.
liked this.
nice
"Serenity shocks us all
by making friend with anguish"
I like this.
=)
unspoken themes ... I like.
This is my favorite:
"Serenity shocks us all
by making friend with anguish"
~Shawna
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I think the same line caught all of us as we read your beautiful poem.
'Serenity shocks us all
by making friend with anguish,'
It was ethereal and reminded me of a fairy story I once read. I loved it. Be blessed!
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Hey Summer this is great and shows your usual originality, this deserves a plot of it's own ;-)
Such a vivid poem. I like the idea of being born on Mars. So very nice!
Loved this one. Thank you for sharing.
Namaste
a melange of images...
wow :) really beautiful
Yeah, love the bit about bare feet on frozen earth!!
unspoken... the strongest word I read today.
This was amazing... such a pull from my spirit with the words...
it was beautiful.. just like summer rain;)
~L
Oh oh oh, I love it! This is a refreshing read, Woo Moon Maiden made me smile big. I'm glad you're writing at the Whirl.
I love how the poem goes so well with the picture, while the picture does not seem real. It is such a peaceful picture though which is why Stormy action is a wrong call. Oh if life were so peaceful.
Thanks so much for sharing this with us for this weeks Theme Thursday Storm. It went well with the theme.
God bless.
beautiful..
Ah, there's a truth to this. Thank you.
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