When you are away,
The day feels heavy.
No mood to get in the game
everything looks gray
On a gray day,
Do you sense my aching heart
When we are apart?
What can you say in 160 characters? (spaces included)
Check it out on Monkey Man.
Hey - you're breaking my heart here!!
Ah, but now we are together again and my heart is singing. :)
Absence makes the heart grow fonder so they say. Well written. :)
WOW.. such a moving 160!
Jingle, this is really romantic!
You are ok?
Love this poem. It happens to be gray where I am but I am choosing to ignore this since my loved ones are around me. Happy Mother's day!!!
hey jingle :D
you won an award :D
A great 160, Jingle. Thanks for playing. Have a solid Sunday.
aw, jingle, this is so sweet! who in their right mind wouldn't love to hear you say this to them?? happy day!
What an amazing post..
Happy Mother's Day..
another winner, but then u always are xxx see u tomorrow evenin my time, have a great Monday xxx
hope the time passes quickly until your love is home once again. nice 160. happy mothers day!
I lovely 160 Jingle! I have felt this heavy heart myself! HUGS to you!
It's been a looooong time since I've felt that way about anyone. *sigh*
Hope you had a great weekend!
It's terrible when you are missing someone!!
Nice! Hits a bit close to home for me at times, tho' :(
awwww that's so cute...
Awww, great 160. Wishing you sunny skies...always.
Very nice 160!
Lovely rhythm Jingle, plus I love that little drawing :)
NICE!!!! so sad and touching
You capture the feeling of temporary separation well.
The way I felt every time my now husband and I had to part ways at the end of each weekend and head back to our respective colleges.
Your words captured it so well!!!
Hope your weekend was wonderful!!!
That's so very sweet, I've enjoyed reading your blog!
Jingle....very moving 160 as it puts a spin of a 180 to shame..very good poem as well..enjoy always(+)
soulbro*:)....HAPPY MONDAY to you also...
Hello, thanks for your lovely comment=0)
It's so hard to say goodbye. Especially when it will be too long until the next visit.
Have a great week!
very cute and touching :)
Oh sweetie! You're amazing.
This is wonderful.... so much said in so few words :-)
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