Sunday, May 2, 2010

You Are Invincible

Like the torch

In a moonless night,

You break the darkness, And

Guide me to the bright site.

Like the air

In the atmosphere,

You keep my dreams alive, by

Showing your support everywhere!

Like the rain

In early spring,

You give life’s meanings

To every living being!

You are the reason

The bells jingle;

You are the reason

All stars twinkle;

You are the reason

The birds whistle;

You are the reason

All children giggle!

Your words always ring true,

Your style is absolutely cool!

Your judgment is incredible,

You are invincible!


This poem is written in December, 2009.
Hope that you enjoy it!


Brian Miller said...

nicely done jingle...
happy sunday!

One Prayer Girl said...

I am enjoying your poem as much in May of 2010 as I would have enjoyed it in December 2009.


Anonymous said...

Said well. I enjoyed it.

Tina said...

Great poem. It left me wondering who it was about. Care to share? And thanks for visiting and following Life is Good.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...


It is about caring and loving friends, or imagery role model,
we need someone who supports and love us in gegenral along the way.

Thank you for the question!
Have Fun!

william manson said...

this was very well written, u are so good at poetry, u are the best xxx

Allisonian said...

Incredible...I love your energy...And boy you showed it very well my friend!!!



Toadee said...

beautiful and stirring

Alice Audrey said...

You are really something.

Sheri said...

yes, i did like it very much! it tickled me to see you use the word 'jingle' in your prose...very clever, my friend!

Christina - Rant Rave Roll said...

That poem is beautiful Jingle. Very lovely.

Jen said...

It's nice to have people in your life who not only seem invincible but make you feel invincible as well.

Eaton Bennett aka Berenice Albrecht said...

Lovely, bringing sunshine to my day, thanks Jingle.

buffalodick said...

Congrats to all that got awards!

Me said...

What a positive message! Nice, very nice! :)

magiceye said...


steveroni said...

Well, the word Jingle sure fits in a December poem--and it rhymes also--grin!

And ya know what? In your poetry and writings you give life meaning for many...YOU are the reason!

ZENDOM said...

You were manifested on day one
You see that you have just begun
It is your inner being that is the Soul
This is the most important part to make you whole
Now with this inner strength as all your might
This makes you invincible with your inner sight

enjoy Jingle(+)

Vanessa said...

I never thought a poem could be adorable until I read that one. :)

THE BEATY said...

nicely done jingle

Pamela said...


Reader Wil said...

Nice poem, Jingle! Have a great week!

Shriti said...

awesome x))

suryagni said...

fantastic. wonderful piece of poetry.

Anonymous said...

Wonderfully written Jingle. Have a good day...:)