Wednesday, May 19, 2010
Kiss You Without Control
When troubles bring you down,
You may not know what to do.
Please look inside your heart,
And you shall know I love you.
You are in each thought I have,
And every breath I take.
You dominate my soul,
With every move I make.
I recall us the way we used to be,
Your smile is so remarkable to me.
What we have shared feels so right,
To say I love you, every single night.
Don’t you know that you make my days count,
I am the happiest when you are around?
It doesn’t matter what others say,
as long as I love you, day by day.
Hold you deep within my soul,
Kiss you without control.
Take me to another dimension
so that I sense the heat of your passion.
On the wings of a rocket,
My love 4 u flies.
Soaring all the way high in the sky,
tears well up in my eyes.
I love you,
This is true!
Posted by Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall at 11:50 PM
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Beautiful, Jingle, you have so magically captured the essence of love, I love this poem.
whoa.. that is good.. real good.. it reminds me of that song "when i am down, and oh my soul so weary" i know it doesn't really relate here, but yeah
So much passion :) Very well done my friend :)
Aww Jingle how sweet...I love this poem!
simple, sincere, honest and pure
there is a lot of passion packed in this one ji
jingle, this is lovely! so full of undying love and devotion...surely this is a reflection of who you are? this kind of loyalty is so rare to find anymore...
beautiful...your heart really comes through...have a great day...full of love coming back to you....
sweet and simple :))
loved it :))
Beautiful poem, Jingle. Lots of love in those words...:)
Hi Jingle .. yours & my mind are in similar places tonight! I also wrote about my love tonight...What a beautiful poem!
Have a happy Thursday!
So sensual and passionate Ji...Isnt love just so beautiful and enchanting!
very nice poem indeed and a rose taboot! :) The Bach
Passionately wonderful, Jingle. Every day can be valentine's day.
By Judy Collins,from the song Clouds..."It's Love's illusions I recall, I really don't know Love at all"...
I love the warmth that the words emit. What a lovely job you have done.
loved it. its full of love and warmth. :)
there are NEVER any troubles when JINGLE is around, sweet poem gifted lady xxx
So, who is Mr. Wonderful? Lovely poem.
So very beautiful !!!! I love it ! :)
OMG! ...and you wrote this? I bow to you. those kinds of words must stir lovely emotions in even the coldest of long-frozen hearts. They did mine...Hmmmmmmm!
Well done, beautifully thought out and written.
It makes me feel sad for all the lonely people in the world who have no-one to care about or care for them...
Love is a wonderous experience..
Lets pass it along. Hugs to you.
I wish someone wrote this for me!! Awesome!!
Beautiful words simply put.
whoever is on the opposite end of that love you are giving is a lucky person! great poem :) brightened my day!
This a very sweet, romantic poem, Jingle.
fiction writers write many fictions, their work reflect multi-layers of life, Happy Potter has little to do with its author J. K. Rowing.
I rarely try such type of love poem, but I am a married woman, I know what it feels like when one is in love and more...
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